Puppy, oh my puppyLook at those big eyes
Your eyes are big and brown
Your nose is wet and round
You are always good and happy
Because you have nothing to worryYou are also loyal and smart
So I can train you whenever I want
I am lucky to meet you puppy
You always give me joy
Are you happy to meet me, too?
I hope soPuppy, oh my puppy
Please be on my side everyday
I wish we could be together everyday
I want to see you everyday
I love you
your ode is so good I like it very much!!!!!
ReplyDeleteit feels like I'm looking at the puppies right now!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tiffany,
ReplyDeleteI love your blog design! Your ode was pretty good! I liked that you were able to effectively express your adoration for your puppies. To be able to write more effectively, you might want to use pronouns as substitutes for nouns to avoid making your writing sound redundant or repetitive (i.e. instead of "My dog" you could say "You." Thanks and see you in class!